Thursday, June 23, 2005

eternal

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eternal
(2nd draft)

looking down, she found
the watch on her wrist
had stopped

its gears could no longer
bleed seconds, its hands
could no longer
tell the hour --

it was free.

a look of envy crossed
her very young face

but the expression
was only there a moment

before a new thought
led her to other things


Jojo
June 23

5 comments:

- litol figgy - said...

naks. nakaka-intriga naman 'to.

Jojo Ballo said...

haha! naintriga ka na naman?? :P

- litol figgy - said...

wala akong magagawa. natural akong intrigera. hehe. :)

Anonymous said...

pwede bang maki-intriga rin? para kanino ito, jowjow? ;)

parang kilala ko! *idea icon* hehe.

Jojo Ballo said...

taduuu!